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Old 06-12-2008, 08:14 AM   #1
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Your Voice

Your voice...
Your voice is driving me fucking crazy.

Only you...
Only you...

I'd rather my ears, burn, smolder, and smoke,
Than go on this way,
Let fluid, my ear canals choke,
Instead of going on this way.

My heart grows heavy,
My eyes, hungry,
My mind won't steady,
For your gorgeous face.

In an eternity within months,
Grey twilight dawns,
With each call,
Color spawns.

Everyone seems afraid of change,
I fear staying the same.
Someplace within nowhere,
Nothing within everything,
Reason, now out of range,
Minds wrapped in egocentonic games,
Spirit, trapped in a cubicle cell,
Never before have you
Seemed so far from me.
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Old 06-12-2008, 06:57 PM   #2
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Re: Your Voice

fucking explaining my feelings as we speak. Connected, good shit.
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Old 06-13-2008, 08:49 AM   #3
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Re: Your Voice

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fucking explaining my feelings as we speak. Connected, good shit.
thank you. finally someone whose not a dick.
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