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Old 02-17-2004, 10:10 AM   #1
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Mothers & Sons

He looks into the space surrounding him and looks and looks and looks. Looking into the infinite... and then the infinite is gone. It is all suddenly red, the brightest red you'll ever see, masking the infinite space. A large rock materializes in the distance, as if it emerged from the sea. On this rock is a picture of his mother, dead and staring through the red fog at her son. Floating, hanging in this space along with her son. The rock vanishes and is replaced with a boat, which the son uses. He floats in his sea for an hour, napping in his boat.
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