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Old 10-09-2013, 07:58 AM   #1
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Neural Floods

The densest of desires has fallen upon me
A striking force, overturning me into a state of obsession
A brisk descension that fully penetrates the whole of time
Heavenly bred and hellishly bound
A catalystic fusion, quantum and nuclear
Mental and Pure
A leap, an arch, and a dive
Chemically Kinetic
Blazing and Rapid
Intending to sterilize the old and to make way for the new.

The next Big Bang, the conception of the New World
Contrived and Conspired, Willed into Being
An Age at Full Mast, the seed shot full blast
Steaming ahead at top speed, breaking new ground
Cultivate and Colonize, spreading the Will of it's originator
To Transform and and Transfigure.

The Inevitability of Change is what keeps Hope alive.
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Old 10-09-2013, 11:02 PM   #2
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Re: Neural Floods

Even though I don't always fully grasp the meaning of your work I find it immensely enjoyable. Everything you write seems to be violently erupting and full of all the things that shape your world view. And although I, personally, don't have the patience to meditate on it all and analyze it thoroughly, I find it still to be a lot of fun and thought-provoking.
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