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06-20-2007, 06:04 AM
I've got some new ambient pieces on my myspace page: www.myspace.com/merkabamanifesto
All comments and criticisms welcome (as long as they're constructive, of course).
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New Ambient Tracks
I've got some new ambient pieces on my myspace page: www.myspace.com/merkabamanifesto
All comments and criticisms welcome (as long as they're constructive, of course).
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And after calming me down with some orange slices and some fetal spooning the ET revealed to me his singular purpose; he said you are the chosen one, the one who will deliver the message, a message of hope for those who will listen and a warning for those who do not. Me, the chosen one! They chose me and I didn't even graduate from fuckin' high school!
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06-20-2007, 07:01 PM
How dare you disable the fast forward feature! j/k
Aquatica: I like the nice little melody you have here, it could almost fit as an intro for the slow version of Pushit or Intension. I didn't really care for the water effect in the background but it's ok.
Green Corridor: Once again a nice melody, the echoes are a pleasant touch. Calm and clear.
TPC: Graceful in progress. Ending stopped short for me.
Overall not bad. I think if you expanded the basic melodies a bit they would really shine.
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06-20-2007, 07:01 PM
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Re: New Ambient Tracks
How dare you disable the fast forward feature! j/k
Aquatica: I like the nice little melody you have here, it could almost fit as an intro for the slow version of Pushit or Intension. I didn't really care for the water effect in the background but it's ok.
Green Corridor: Once again a nice melody, the echoes are a pleasant touch. Calm and clear.
TPC: Graceful in progress. Ending stopped short for me.
Overall not bad. I think if you expanded the basic melodies a bit they would really shine.
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06-24-2007, 10:24 PM
Pretty nice.
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06-24-2007, 10:24 PM
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Re: New Ambient Tracks
Pretty nice.
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07-10-2007, 07:17 AM
i really liked it. i'm always down for a little ambiance
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07-10-2007, 07:17 AM
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Re: New Ambient Tracks
i really liked it. i'm always down for a little ambiance
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07-10-2007, 11:24 AM
The individual tracks are nice, but I think I'm with Synergy, in that I think the ideas presented in each track are good ideas, but they should be developed further. It almost seems like you could combine these 3 tracks into one track - I think they're aesthetically similar enough. You might just need some sort of underlying theme/noise to link them together.
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07-10-2007, 11:24 AM
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Re: New Ambient Tracks
The individual tracks are nice, but I think I'm with Synergy, in that I think the ideas presented in each track are good ideas, but they should be developed further. It almost seems like you could combine these 3 tracks into one track - I think they're aesthetically similar enough. You might just need some sort of underlying theme/noise to link them together.
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