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Music = 'Judith' by APC http://toolnavy.com/showthread.php?t=79756
i dunno, i just didn't have much in terms of actual footage content, so i tried to make up for it with the editing.
probably tried to show off a little too much
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It is a cool idea, i like what you have so far. It needs more substance more footage of other envirnments and maybe some religious aspects, (because of the song meaning).
Looks like you have good control in your fading and transitioning, you just need more footage to play with.
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it was really good, the only problem was the shaky camera, and i think you should have put that girl on an empty spring bed (no mattress) out in an old abandoned factory, something colder.
It is a cool idea, i like what you have so far. It needs more substance more footage of other envirnments and maybe some religious aspects, (because of the song meaning).
Looks like you have good control in your fading and transitioning, you just need more footage to play with.
thanks for the feedback chalk_line, will definitely be getting more footage for the final cut.
though i can't really think of what else to film, since i didn't really put massive thought behind the footage i used in terms of its relation to the song anyhow.... any suggestions?
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Music = 'Judith' by APC http://toolnavy.com/showthread.php?t=79756
it was really good, the only problem was the shaky camera, and i think you should have put that girl on an empty spring bed (no mattress) out in an old abandoned factory, something colder.
The room was too warm for the idea.
But it was really good.
the shaky camera was intentional since i didn't have enough time or any decent cameras or rigs to play around with.. but i know what you mean about the room
pink bedroom never really came to mind whenever i listened to that song :)
but still.. it was kind of a rush decision on my part because i was too stupid to plan ahead
i can't refilm the whole thing, but that bedframe in an old factory idea sounds pretty good. i think i'll use it for one of my future projects
thanks a lot tomisatool
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