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Old 06-14-2014, 07:04 PM   #1
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Architecture of the Architect

Interior infinities long to escape you,
to become concrete and static,
to have that moment of stillness.

While exterior stillframes,
our finite externalities yearn
for the eternality of abstraction.

We are the fountainheads of consciousness,
creativity pours forth from our beings only,
we spew our ideals, we lay down blueprints of utopias
spilling forth the beauty we conjure,
summoning greatness from the aether,
palpating and materializing the infinite impressions
that press upon our wakefulness. . .

Once placed outside of ourselves,
thoughts, eternal, become finite for an infinity. .

The paradox of man, finite moments within an seemingly infinite finity.
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Old 06-14-2014, 07:24 PM   #2
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Re: Architecture of the Architect

This body is too small
a cage for all that is inside

I like ur work very much
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Old 06-14-2014, 08:33 PM   #3
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Re: Architecture of the Architect

thanks gypsy :)
Great way to simplify it. Life ruptures from us. . .

Plus i wanted to edit the last two phrases. .

"Once placed outside of ourselves,
thoughts, eternal, become finite forever. .

The paradox of man, finite minds within a seemingly endless moment."

Thanks again, I enjoyed writing this more than I have the past twenty posts of mine. I hit a pure vein with this one. . .
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Old 06-16-2014, 12:44 PM   #4
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Re: Architecture of the Architect

The universal sprinkler oscillates in elliptical eternity
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