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Old 06-06-2007, 09:14 AM   #81
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Re: You name it

Across the ocean, in chase of some sidereal
Along the mountains and hills, looking down below
watching both from above, our hindsight below,
seeing the coral erode through the glass,
and the high-earth we step on, crumble from beneath us
all the while looking up at that same star

Fuck, Apollo.
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Old 06-06-2007, 09:28 AM   #82
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Every window lacks lenity.
It is rich in filters.
They rock back in forth
reminding me of similies.

Christmas would come with some clarity,
a breath of fresh space.
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Old 06-12-2007, 07:54 AM   #83
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My hand
My hand
and english tells me
that this is not at all me
its only a possesion

Before I learn the next box
I take a look around
with a limitless line of boxes
I feel silly
thinking my perception's sound.
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