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10-22-2005, 04:36 PM
I made a song, it's called "Green Eyes."
Check it out, it's a bit different.
It may be pretty boring though, my guitar broke so I had to whip out my bass and see what I could do with it... Critique it if you wanna, I could use suggestions anyways- it's for some girl I plan on dating.
www.myspace.com/phosphorescence
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I made a song, it's called "Green Eyes."
Check it out, it's a bit different.
It may be pretty boring though, my guitar broke so I had to whip out my bass and see what I could do with it... Critique it if you wanna, I could use suggestions anyways- it's for some girl I plan on dating.
www.myspace.com/phosphorescence
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10-22-2005, 04:55 PM
What are you thinking??/?///?????
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10-22-2005, 06:29 PM
Trash it?
Well I took it off myspace lol.
What's wrong with it? List everything if you can.
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Trash it?
Well I took it off myspace lol.
What's wrong with it? List everything if you can.
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Pros: - Good vocal approach
- Fitting Bass
- Nice guitar Line
Con: - Song goes hardly anywhere!
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Re: Noble(5)
Pros: - Good vocal approach
- Fitting Bass
- Nice guitar Line
Con: - Song goes hardly anywhere!
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You can't get any more criticism if you take it off.
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10-23-2005, 04:08 PM
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You can't get any more criticism if you take it off.
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10-23-2005, 05:50 PM
What? It wasn't bad criticizm.
Although, the song was rather flatsided, it went nowhere as Tyro pointed out.
It seemed to use the same chord the whole way through. there was no transition. Vocals fit, the beat and sound was OK, but nothing was moving, it's like your walking and going nowhere. and you see the same thing over and over.
Put it back on Myspace, get more than one opinion.
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Re: Noble(5)
What? It wasn't bad criticizm.
Although, the song was rather flatsided, it went nowhere as Tyro pointed out.
It seemed to use the same chord the whole way through. there was no transition. Vocals fit, the beat and sound was OK, but nothing was moving, it's like your walking and going nowhere. and you see the same thing over and over.
Put it back on Myspace, get more than one opinion.
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10-24-2005, 05:30 PM
nah I'll take your word for it, I have another project in mind... that girl is a bitch to impress anyways haha.
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nah I'll take your word for it, I have another project in mind... that girl is a bitch to impress anyways haha.
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