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10-11-2005, 09:36 AM
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hey guys, some of my friends and myself got together and put out a few songs. we're playing a few shows in the coming weeks, and i would really really appreciate some feedback on these songs.

We already know we need to tweak some things, but we would really like some outside opinions on the matter.

http://www.myspace.com/jacobenwood

thanks.
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i would love feedback on this.

hey guys, some of my friends and myself got together and put out a few songs. we're playing a few shows in the coming weeks, and i would really really appreciate some feedback on these songs.

We already know we need to tweak some things, but we would really like some outside opinions on the matter.

http://www.myspace.com/jacobenwood

thanks.
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10-11-2005, 09:51 AM
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good arrows! don't normally listen to that kind of thing but you guys do it well!
nice grooves!

(only listened to 2 of the songs, i'll listen to the others in a bit.)
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Re: i would love feedback on this.

good arrows! don't normally listen to that kind of thing but you guys do it well!
nice grooves!

(only listened to 2 of the songs, i'll listen to the others in a bit.)
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10-11-2005, 10:49 AM
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thanks, man.
which ones did you listen to?
anything we could do differently?
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thanks, man.
which ones did you listen to?
anything we could do differently?
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10-27-2005, 07:58 AM
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really though... any feedback at all...

testing... 1, 2.
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Re: i would love feedback on this.

really though... any feedback at all...

testing... 1, 2.
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10-27-2005, 11:48 AM
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I listened to all 4. Not bad at all. They have a catchy quality to them, and I'm sure your audiences will get into it. As for what needs improvement, I think, are the lyrics. They're kind of bland and repetitive. Also, you might do well with some energetic guitar solos.

When I heard the first song that played, I was reminded of the band Death From Above 1979. Check them out if you don't know them - maybe you'll get an idea or two. They seem to have a similar style, imo.
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Re: i would love feedback on this.

I listened to all 4. Not bad at all. They have a catchy quality to them, and I'm sure your audiences will get into it. As for what needs improvement, I think, are the lyrics. They're kind of bland and repetitive. Also, you might do well with some energetic guitar solos.

When I heard the first song that played, I was reminded of the band Death From Above 1979. Check them out if you don't know them - maybe you'll get an idea or two. They seem to have a similar style, imo.
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10-27-2005, 05:49 PM
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thanks, man.
i hear what you're saying about the lyrics. i'm just the drummer, so i really never had a hand in that part of the writing process. same thing with the guitar solos. but in the newer songs that we're working on for our full-length, we've been trying to add a few more guitar breaks, and pay a bit more attention to the words gonig into the microphone.

any other suggestions?
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Re: i would love feedback on this.

thanks, man.
i hear what you're saying about the lyrics. i'm just the drummer, so i really never had a hand in that part of the writing process. same thing with the guitar solos. but in the newer songs that we're working on for our full-length, we've been trying to add a few more guitar breaks, and pay a bit more attention to the words gonig into the microphone.

any other suggestions?
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