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Old 06-11-2007, 12:07 AM   #81
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rocks the paper
winter hazard and little jackie
papers; played with puffs all day long and look where it got them.
rocks paper is used to determine the outcome of a disputed call in volleyball and jackie paper isnt burnin with puffs any more is he? i havent heard anything to say he is.

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Old 06-11-2007, 07:27 AM   #82
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rocks the soul
summer's here and I smell it burning in the night
giving me wisps of self-hatred
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Old 06-11-2007, 09:12 AM   #83
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fold these things into my most quiet tomorrow,
loathe little airplanes left to drift in the vaccuum
hapless and scribbled with intentions.

monkeys out the window seem so amusing,
playful and remeniscent.
This shaven, thin and wet figure in the door is unsettling,
without a word he threshes the floor from under me,
makes me thresh,
hands me a dictionary and tells me to write in the space where
a drying pink pinecone should be.
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Old 06-11-2007, 05:49 PM   #84
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Decayed by the wind
black as charcoal
holding up for so long...
I release their tension
I undo what has been done
without a whisper I discard the remains
like they were never useful to me at all.

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Old 06-11-2007, 09:59 PM   #85
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reminiscing hours in the bedroom
are we safe?
i think someones at the door
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Old 06-12-2007, 07:14 AM   #86
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a sallow trapped inside
cowering from the sky
Hiding from the dice

Hell die in four days
when he eats all that rice
luckily he had lots of walls

dont hide
sallows dont belong inside.
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Old 06-12-2007, 07:54 AM   #87
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snake eyes..
The grand illusion.
Six sides, different, but all the same number?

One plus One is One that is Greater.
One and One on opposite sides of each other.
One and One finish our appointment..
It's like a rubiks cube where all sides are the same color
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Old 06-12-2007, 01:11 PM   #88
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you would think they would know each other
but they dont
thier seperate and strangers
a complete question
from thier toes to thier fingers
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Old 06-12-2007, 01:29 PM   #89
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a last post?
did i cross a line?
gasping, tdn fading,
breathless,
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to be continued?
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Old 06-12-2007, 01:46 PM   #90
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as hell's existence
does not give heaven verity
in the eyes of a barber, splitting a single strand of hair
into two, no, four strands, splitting those four strands back again
all four, (or eight, was it thirty-two?) leading back to sheets of dead skin
a pale pallet, brown-nosed, diving into pink.
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Old 06-13-2007, 08:16 PM   #91
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with eyelids fluttering,
reminiscing of the finale: a certain black bird
giant wings lift up and carry her away
into the night,
falling, fading, closing as the shutters call out the curtains,

this ending, now nothing more than hindsight.
not a difference is made.

I remain dry, just so I'll know
all is still right.
I would not dare gamble with that kind of closure.
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