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Old 01-11-2019, 05:10 PM   #1
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Ourboric Mental Gifs

Gone. . .
briskly whisked away. .
up and away
like the collective motion
of the startled flock.

Siphoned upwards and rightways
like an inverted sidewinder. . .
quickly becoming
the intangible thoughts at which we grasp. . .
the uncontainable breath at which we gasp. . .
the unbreachable gates at which we rasp. . . .

Past
scenes
that endlessly stain our retina. . .
sounds
that eternally strike our minds. . .
smells
that open infinite portals of time. . .

Painfully untouchable. . .
yet pricelessly possessed.

Seen
like faint spiderwebs
that dissolve in our minds
even upon the faintest of focus. .
gone away. . .
into
an inexplorable land that only explores us. . .
an inexposable realm that only exposes us. . .

Cast away beyond some impermeable
membrane that nourishes us in placental fashion
whilst also slowly consuming us into its implacable void.

Beautiful photons tumbling through the aether -- rotary, whole, divine, and unending.
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Old 01-12-2019, 09:57 AM   #2
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Re: Ourboric Mental Gifs

Absolutely love this.

So many good things in this.

I tip my hat to you. Good work.
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