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Old 07-11-2010, 01:28 PM   #1
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Sky Blue

Sky without a whisper or waver:
gold distort before the storm-
endless in it's wake,
resonates autumn thoughts in shrouded poetry.
An entwined dreamer, descending as his
lost grave washes away:
From dust to fire an ethereal trial partakes.

"In waiting I'm shaking
purging sin by skinning memory
denying everything...

the sky blue day with you."

It came from magnetic poetry- I've had such a block for a couple years now this may be my last post in prose. Hope it does something to someone.
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Old 08-12-2010, 06:27 AM   #2
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Re: Sky Blue

Lol your still posting... nicely haunting feeling
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Old 08-13-2010, 07:38 AM   #3
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Re: Sky Blue

yes, i like it
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