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Old 12-14-2004, 04:48 AM   #1
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The Hearts Inhabitant

I dwell deep inside
Seeking my rhythmic tranquil asylum.
Calmness always just one step ahead
Enticing those who desire serenity.

Here you will find the addicts
Daydreamers left wanting more……
Hoping to bask themselves in the relentless drumming
Customary to their sanctuary.

Waiting for the moment
The one moment in which the beat of the drum and
The beat of my desires intertwines.
This is truly when I have discovered myself
Broken free from the oxidized chains of a dismal existence.
My being manifested, For Now…..I have a home.
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Old 12-15-2004, 09:41 AM   #2
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Re: The Hearts Inhabitant

Tihs is really good.
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