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07-25-2009, 06:38 PM
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Up From The Skies
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Cauterized
Burnt beyond oblivion
scarred and charred
black is all that remains
Bound by these rusty chains
cold damp floor
doesn't let sleep in
Dreams of cosmic vacations
are distant memories
as the charcoal mist drifts in
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07-26-2009, 10:51 AM
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Re: Cauterized
Nice, as are all the things you post, lotus. Short, sweet, not over yoked with too many adjectives.
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07-28-2009, 01:21 PM
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Re: Cauterized
Glad you like it, thanks infinitee.
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