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Old 06-11-2009, 08:10 AM   #1
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My Exqusite Cadaver with a friend

Since you guys didn't want to play anymore, I decided to play with a friend. This is what perspired. This is the revised version.

Romanticizing Desolation and Optimism

The shattered hallway of broken glass
Darkens in the failing twilight,
Leaving obscure images scattered about the ground.
Shadows portraying events of history, current, and potential.
They all merge into one silhouetted pane
That dances hither, thither, and yon on the cobblestone walkway.
Golden eyes pulsate in godhead sockets.
Every atom’s rhythm in time with its own.
In the void of its orbs, all is romanticized, desolate, and optimistic.
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Old 06-12-2009, 11:02 AM   #2
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Re: My Exqusite Cadaver with a friend

I want to play.
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Old 06-12-2009, 06:15 PM   #3
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Re: My Exqusite Cadaver with a friend

You can't make an already complete Frankenstein's dick smaller so it could fit inside your ass. Or something.
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