dead1nyou

I whisper softly to those who died
Faded by burdens through thoughts and eyes
No change to emotion as you suffer in spirit
A secret the ocean in which you are ghosts

Open my eyes to the unexplainable
Tell me why I feel so close?
Are you watching me?
Stuck between heaven an hell
I call it shadow when I here it
I can't believe I feel this haunted

I call out to those who've tried
Make believe those burdens didn't color your eyes
No feeling is easy when your along for the ride
A torture set in motion casting you in to the ocean

Stuck Between Heaven an Hell
Watching someone else
A dream you had when you were in love
Fall asleep just to wake up to the black

Recognize
Theres
Always
A
Way
Out

infinitee

The best was the first stanza

I would work on the rest

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"You are, and shall be, set in obsidian obelisk.
Those scars, these memories, will see you through"

dead1nyou

Thanks for the opinion

Thoughts come out the way they do
I'm writing out of body and mind

and I would probably do a lot better if
I didn't free style it
but then again I like the mystery
with something I've wrote

I try and write about something
I've experienced and I get lost
that and I'm stoned lol