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Old 07-22-2009, 08:53 AM   #1
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monster slayer

bone rattle
old shaking bones
shuffle down the street
awakening black pouch
of like shields
familiar warrior tooth
twin teeth we suckle
from a black panther

Bone rattle
old shaky bones
shuffle in beauty
awakening black pouch
of like shields.

Monster Slayer, Born for Water
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Old 07-22-2009, 09:07 AM   #2
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Re: monster slayer

ehhh, I'm not feelin' this one, dude
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Old 07-22-2009, 04:08 PM   #3
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Re: monster slayer

old shaky bones are all thats left this shell of darkness where i dwell everyday even though this sadness seems insane i wished today something would change despite being lost in every way...my fingers numb i try some drug but here the escape is pain in an intoxicating way
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