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Old 01-17-2007, 10:33 PM   #1
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im a newbie...need constructive criticism

hi, im new here..and i just wanted to know what you guys think of my artwork..most of it is inspired by music. Anyways, enough of the artsy fartsy talk here's some of them. im cool with any kind of criticism.

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http://axayacatl667.deviantart.com/gallery/
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Old 01-17-2007, 10:44 PM   #2
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Woah. Awesome. Don't know what to say except keep up the good work. Have any prints available? I'd really like a poster of "beautiful nightmare"
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Old 01-18-2007, 06:39 AM   #3
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well... here you go..


you have some nice stuff. ;) LOL
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Old 01-18-2007, 08:12 AM   #4
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awesome!
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Old 01-18-2007, 08:22 AM   #5
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great stuff, my only advice, dont stop drawing!
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Old 01-19-2007, 12:47 AM   #6
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Re: im a newbie...need constructive criticism

Those are great.
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Old 01-19-2007, 08:30 AM   #7
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Re: im a newbie...need constructive criticism

You have some nice stuff,but there are some not so nice.
I like "the artist",it's so simple yet deep...
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Old 01-19-2007, 08:38 AM   #8
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good work indeed but you still have a lot of potential
don't stop
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Old 01-19-2007, 08:40 PM   #9
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i like how your art is influenced by dreams/music. some of the pieces could be really strong with more detail, but i truly love the colors and concepts. it feels like thoughts translated to paper
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Old 01-20-2007, 02:17 AM   #10
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Your way of drawing is like one of my friend's, cool. I like the whole "graffiti-like" vibe in your work, and some of your drawings are simple and deep. On the other hand, maybe you should put either more energy to your technique, or search for more info in your item of drawing...

Either way, I overall like your work.
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Old 01-20-2007, 10:21 AM   #11
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Impressive, and as adamantly stated above, keep drawing.
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Old 01-20-2007, 04:17 PM   #12
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nice work you got there.
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Old 01-20-2007, 10:27 PM   #13
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thanks for all the feedback, and i dont have prints yet resonance. and yeah, i need to get better on my skills, i need some art school classes, cuz all i do is just out of thought.
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Old 01-23-2007, 09:21 AM   #14
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amazing, so great infact ill have to hit you up one day to do some album art for me, got real talent
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Old 01-23-2007, 10:52 AM   #15
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Amazing dude I wish I could draw like that!!!!
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Old 01-23-2007, 03:01 PM   #16
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There isn't much to say that hasn't already been said. Good job.
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Old 01-23-2007, 10:34 PM   #17
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When prints are available, PM me.
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Old 01-24-2007, 10:40 AM   #18
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This is what my ART world is about.................
"Most Impressive" * best Darth Vader voice*
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Old 01-24-2007, 05:36 PM   #19
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Quote:
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This is what my ART world is about.................
"Most Impressive" * best Darth Vader voice*
thank you...master.
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Old 01-24-2007, 05:37 PM   #20
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thanks to everyone for the feedback, I will let you know when prints become available.
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