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Old 04-14-2014, 07:19 AM   #1
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Eat,Sleep,Fuck

that extra effort you had forgotten how to give
is what warped you into those different realms

that hyper-reality that gave you new skin
in some ways, you are your own mother
inseminated with thought seeds
by some phallic god force
life is a womb
and you're the mother-fucked self-fed placenta
you're the decider, the catalyst
to feed or
malnourish

ouroboric facts:
you are your own sustenance
your own fuel
feed off of others and you'll fade away
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Old 05-08-2014, 06:45 PM   #2
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Re: Eat,Sleep,Fuck

I love the message and the imagery. I have written a poem with a similar message, but all of my poetry so far is very clear and literal. I want to start being more metaphorical and this is great inspiration. Thanks for posting ^_^
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Old 05-10-2014, 06:11 PM   #3
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