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Old 06-16-2005, 01:14 PM   #1
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The Gymnasium Sphere

Rise to repetitve
relative day
find the package of joy in the ceiling that sways
Johnny and Patty and Kristen come near
As we walk underneath the Gymnasium Sphere

Look through elusive and
shameless decay
touch the bright happiness at the peak there for days
Amy and Billy and Joey lose fear
As we gaze at the gorgeous Gymnasium Sphere

Don't think too quickly now
don't take all day
consume the nectareous ocular entree
Sally and Krystal and Tommy be dears
As we dive into the far Gymnasium Sphere

Retire swiftly just
keep eyes away
insulate from the glass shards some harboring way
Andy and Jenny and Tracy lose tier
As we bleed from the shattered Gymnasium Sphere

Value the lessons but keep dear life near
As we await paramedics to dry our blood tears

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Old 06-16-2005, 01:23 PM   #2
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Re: The Gymnasium Sphere

This is really fucked up. Although it has a simple plot, I put some effort into the structure. It can be about anything cause I have no idea what the fuck this is about.
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Old 06-16-2005, 01:44 PM   #3
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Re: The Gymnasium Sphere

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As we dive into the far Gymnasium Sphere
I don't know if you mistyped that or if it's supposed to be that way, but I'd change it to "As we dive far into the Gymnasium Sphere". Maybe the meaning is lost if you change it though?
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Old 06-16-2005, 01:48 PM   #4
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Re: The Gymnasium Sphere

"far" describes "gymnasium sphere"
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