here is some artwork that i made for my band, im planning on sticking it on a t shirt! so what do you people think? constructive comments would be usefull
The picture itself is great, but the logo (and the name of the band for that matter) is crap. Maybe try making something a bit more calligraphic, with desaturated colors to match the rest of the shirt.
At the very least, replace that red glow with a thick black outline or something.
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Last edited by psilomind; 11-29-2004 at 01:16 PM..
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i agree with you psilomind, i just made up the band name fast, eleven is my fav number, and lives well fuck i dont know where the hell that came from, anyways thanks everyone for the comments, i apprieciate them all, and yeah greg dude hook me up with some kick ass caligraphy fonts.
I agree the text looks a little out of place, but I would desaturate the colors. You want your name to be known- find some colors that work better, and maybe a different style or font.
I agree the text looks a little out of place, but I would desaturate the colors. You want your name to be known
Right now the name stands out, but the way your name would stand out if stuck your finger up your ass and scrawled it (your name) onto the Mona Lisa (with shit). Is there some reason why you can't you put the name on Side A and your art on Side B?
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Right now the name stands out, but the way your name would stand out if stuck your finger up your ass and scrawled it (your name) onto the Mona Lisa (with shit).
Dude what in the hell do you mean by that?
Do you have plans for both sides of the shirt?
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