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Old 03-08-2007, 08:54 AM   #1
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Haiku fun...

Tokin' ze kush-in,
Out-side a frosty morning,
Ahhh... look at my lawn.
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Old 03-08-2007, 08:58 AM   #2
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"Emotional Chemistry"

Drug. Double helix
spiral. Nervous system. Breathe.
(chemical feeling)
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Old 03-08-2007, 10:05 AM   #3
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I like it Jeff, very simple but it says a lot.
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Old 03-08-2007, 11:02 AM   #4
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I think it is ridiculous, absolutely ridiculous. But it made me giggle. 5-7-5, right?

Mods sent me to room,
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Old 03-08-2007, 12:16 PM   #5
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Moderator, (s)He
was trying to send signal:
Be more nice next time =)
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Old 03-08-2007, 12:32 PM   #6
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Re: Haiku fun...

I know. I'm a prick. But people like me usually are, whether we are or not.

Wanna see something cool? Here goes anyway...

WEATHER: the shit outside your window
WHETHER: introducing an indirect question or an expression of doubt between choice of alternative.
WETHER: a castrated goat
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Old 03-08-2007, 03:59 PM   #7
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Re: Haiku fun...

lol weed sure is great.
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Old 03-08-2007, 09:49 PM   #8
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lol weed sure is great.
:) yup.
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Old 03-08-2007, 09:51 PM   #9
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I think it is ridiculous, absolutely ridiculous. But it made me giggle. 5-7-5, right?
Ridiculous..? LoL, I think it's bloody brilliant, to be honest. I don't know, it's really simple, but I felt as though I made it deep enough to be "fun" IMO. I love it... :)
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I am being chastised by three nobs in the 10,000 days section. It is awful. They shit on every intelligent thing i say, i try to wipe it up. So here i am, wiping shit off of practically everything.
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Old 03-09-2007, 07:05 AM   #11
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Ridiculous..? LoL, I think it's bloody brilliant, to be honest. I don't know, it's really simple, but I felt as though I made it deep enough to be "fun" IMO. I love it... :)
I think jevons was referring to -His- haiku about getting probation. Not Yours bro.
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I think jevons was referring to -His- haiku about getting probation. Not Yours bro.
Ya know, I think you just may be on to something here... LoL. Thanks...
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Old 03-09-2007, 07:20 AM   #13
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Sometimes communication can be a bitch when One cant hear the Others tone of voice. Dont feel bad. I have to read every post twice before I begin to understand it.. and most times I'm still wrong about what I read lol.
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