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08-10-2006, 04:04 PM
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Level 3 - Talker
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Israel
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Unchained
There is no lower than this,
A nightmare comes full circle.
Im ready to fall to pieces,
I Know you want to see me crawl.
Maybe its you, Maybe its me,
Maybe Im somewhere in between.
Maybe your'e right, Maybe im weak,
But its just you who makes me sick.
Myabe its close, Maybe its far,
But now i know just who you are.
Dont really matter, not eny more,
'Cause im going out that fucking door.
..........What do you guys think??? would love to hear some opinions.
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08-10-2006, 04:45 PM
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Banned.
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: "Send out the Black bird.....
Posts: 3,406
Bincount™: 41
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Re: Unchained
Not bad , do you write often?
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08-10-2006, 11:16 PM
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Level 3 - Talker
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Israel
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Re: Unchained
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Originally Posted by pivotal digit
Not bad , do you write often?
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This is actually the first thing i ever wrote. |
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