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Old 04-11-2010, 01:06 PM   #1
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Inertia

In a thousand places,
The earth is parting.

Give the flower a chance.

We've all been buried before.
We've all risen in the spring.

We can all remember,
At least something of dying-
And being reborn.

We all know something,
About being torn.
Holding on.
And letting go..

Better days...

Changes are coming,
The edges are frayed-

Just give the flower a chance...
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Old 04-21-2010, 09:00 AM   #2
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Re: Inertia

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Old 04-22-2010, 03:40 AM   #3
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Re: Inertia

the form seems a little excessive. try writing it above a urinal in black marker.
*roll on the floor while touching self*
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