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Old 05-10-2003, 08:41 PM   #1
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short, just wrote it now

i plan on putting some more stuff in, i'm just bored and writing now, and i might as well share. if theres more to it later, i'll post it in here again. its not titled, like most of my stuff

settle me down
in paranoid surroundings,
ease my mind
i'm so fast to hear muffled noises,
to notice a glance to the side.
pull me down
out of this scene
come when im starting to get lost
save this from me


anyway thats it for now. let me know what you think
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Old 05-10-2003, 08:57 PM   #2
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ok this one isnt related, but i didnt want to make a new post. this ones also untitled


under folds of skin
i find myself, embraced within
a world of color, blues and reds
taking me away from a gray world
with people who have words to be said
yet their mouths opens and shuts
like their eyes dawning on realization.
i find myself, cut and compromised
disguised beyond identification
cut off from dreams and values.
sink to my knees, consumed by disease
this is easy, this is routine
i bite my lip and begin surfacing
under the layers, soft and warm
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