Today is not as bright as yesterday.
All I remember is my curiousity running away;
Everything I've known aged faster than me.
I grew to live.
My true love in life had a color I could almost taste when I closed my eyes.
Now a snake covered my tracks; my earliest sunrise dissapeared as it chased me further away.
A fine line rests between what cannot be seen and what I cannot percieve.
All that is apparrent, are the trees that once had a nest,
The sand that once had a picture;
The yesterday that used to have a tomarrow.
*if there are any suggestion of what to change, or to whether or not i should trash it, please let me know.*
Today is not as bright as yesterday.
All I remember is my curiousity running away;
My true love in life had a color I could almost taste when I closed my eyes.
*if there are any suggestion of what to change, or to whether or not i should trash it, please let me know.*
I like these lines in particular- some of the rest of it seems to have problems with tense..although this may be deliberate. I relate to the lines I showed, maybe that's why I liked them...the rest is little obscure to me...Keep writing
well if you want to know what its about, its basically about the same memory problem that was in the other piece of writing i made named "oblivion's effection."
