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Old 07-11-2005, 03:01 PM   #1
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Let's Crush this Poor Fucker's Dreams

Dum diddly dee -to the happy place we go-
cos' the ladies there are free -eating Ruffles where the sand blows-
Fat Ass Humphrey, sees, a brand new blue goatee
Then rips the leather screw off his classic Motley Crue

Doowop doo do doo -go the tunes they're all so new-
From the Cadillac convertible, where sandy sober uncle Earl
Points out the ladies from the girls -doowop ohh waah-
They're all so tan and beautiful, the lust of
Fat Ass Humphrey's world he sees them and belives in:

"I-could-be...a great. Man. Too."

Chraismatic intellectuals, promiscuous bisexuals,
destruction all intenional
-ooohhhh -doo doo doo doooo- waaaah-

the Cadillac convertible, the one with sober uncle earl, runs over Humphrey's lipid world -And bloooooood

tracks follow our wind
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Old 07-11-2005, 05:54 PM   #2
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Re: Let's Crush this Poor Fucker's Dreams

ok i read over this approximately 4 times.

The first time i read this, i played some 80's rock in my head with the occassional wah petal stepping in when need be. 2nd time I thought of some bling blingin rap beat with trumpets and such in the back round making it sound all rich. 3rd time blues- and that was really cool, i liked it then. 4th time...country...ew.
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Old 07-11-2005, 09:33 PM   #3
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Re: Let's Crush this Poor Fucker's Dreams

is this sad or happy?
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Old 07-12-2005, 06:52 AM   #4
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Very up beat, I was happy just reading it.
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Old 07-12-2005, 08:41 AM   #5
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Re: Let's Crush this Poor Fucker's Dreams

As usual very dark, unfortunately I don't get many of the cultural references. You know, I don't really get touched by much of your stuff. I however can see how other people would really like it. I guess its just not my style. I do find your techniques interesting and try to learn a bit from them.
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Old 07-13-2005, 09:44 AM   #6
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Re: Let's Crush this Poor Fucker's Dreams

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Originally Posted by Nathan6887
As usual very dark, unfortunately I don't get many of the cultural references. You know, I don't really get touched by much of your stuff. I however can see how other people would really like it. I guess its just not my style. I do find your techniques interesting and try to learn a bit from them.
Where are you from, anyway?

To Vlad: Good stuff, unique and sarcastically dark yet interesting and catchy. Kudos! I'm going to go read more of your stuff.
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Old 07-14-2005, 07:47 PM   #7
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Re: Let's Crush this Poor Fucker's Dreams

its cool. reminds me of an acid jazz band i like ..soul coughing. and i like the ubeat read to it with the dark and kinda desperate content.
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