Coiencidently, I feel a little lost in posting this one. Just thought I'd mention that...
Lost Again
Can you tell me who I am?
I’d really like to know
I haven’t seen my father
Since he left right out that door
All I know is where I’m not at
All I don’t want to know is here
I’m with myself in spirit
Blindly led without destiny
Feel the heart that shows
Itself to those who don’t
Want anything to do with this
All the symbolism lost
In a simple kiss
Some call it death
Others call it pain
I call it life and I don’t want to live it again
It can’t come to slow
Moves far from fast
I’m stuck here
Waiting on the end
To something that won’t
Losing a fighting battle
With the enemy
Myself
Can you help me
I’m looking for myself
Lost here in the desert
Seemingly deserting my wealth
Golden fiddles are blaring
With trumpets made of bronze
Staring at the middle ground
Known simply as “gone”
In the wind
The sky
Water dust of life
Can’t complain I simply
Pout because it’s more work
When the day is done
But I still can’t find my where abouts though you look like you don’t know
Can you help?
You’re in the same boat as me
I can see it in your eye that you know what I can’t do
Therefore you’re the ticket
To leave this oasis of confusion
Lost in simple actions
Turn off the light that causes me to think
I want to go on shut down
But it’s set to restart
I’d rather not confirm myself into a state of reoccurring events
So I was hoping that you could help
Since you’re in the same boat as me?
__________________ When the system crashes who will reconstruct it, will you sit and watch your demise be built infront of you?
It made my head hurt, I'll give you that.
I'm fairly impressed as well as extremely disgusted to find that no one else replied to your descriptive summary of the situation.
I'll save it for later reading, it's not my type of poetry but I like how everything just fits in it, as well as in my own type of mentality and such. Keep it up and keep posting even if no one seems to care about what you've written.
But when it comes down to it, this thing you've written probably hit a lot of people hard- at least the ones who are in the same boat.
Yeah, I need to go back and add punctuation, it just doesn't occur to me when I'm writng because usually I'm not thinking all the way through, but "going with the flow" so to speak.
__________________ When the system crashes who will reconstruct it, will you sit and watch your demise be built infront of you?
