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Old 02-15-2012, 12:50 AM   #1
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Whispers left to remember

an echo of a word
you once said
a lost voice in a world
of pain that led
two of us to a destiny
a potential blessing
turned violent epiphany
of how hopeless our beloved blasphemy
and both of us to blame
inventing lies to hide shame
bewildered and powerless
lonely and thoughtless
we were the ones waiting
for eternal happiness
too blind to see
lustful sexuality
our stupid fantasy
undone by false vanity
and who were we
to believe this could be anything
but a painful calamity
you were everything
and now regret left grudingly
each other for loving
the other when longing
and tears were all we shared
no matter how much we cared
the disaster is the beware
a warning no one heeds
the pain everyone feeds
and in all these things
i just see you
in songs and true
spoken words of passerbys
id give anything to trade lies
for one more kiss
a laugh a smile and a wish
i shall miss
those beautiful lips
placing my hand on your hip
my arm over your slip
take this bit
of me, my soul
the hole can't grow any bigger
how low it is to get to the trigger
may my end be the godsend
you were waiting
happiness dating death
whispers remembered whats left
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Old 02-15-2012, 01:26 AM   #2
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Re: Whispers left to remember

dgc lmo

4 years lost just like that happyanniversary knifedigs and laughingwigs wear it like acrown
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Old 02-24-2012, 10:42 PM   #3
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happiness dating death
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Old 02-24-2012, 10:45 PM   #4
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dgc lmo

4 years lost just like that happyanniversary knifedigs and laughingwigs wear it like acrown
you can move on bro. it wasn't meant to be. let go and free yourself from the past and look towards the future.

as a wine maker/musician once said "give away the stone!"
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Old 02-24-2012, 11:45 PM   #5
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thank u lo7us my friend, i appreciate that...hope one day i can, again thanks ur donkey will always remember you
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know that without the knowledge of pain, no person could appreciate joy
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Old 04-05-2012, 02:29 AM   #7
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indeed. just as without the darkness, we could not appreciate the light.
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Old 03-18-2021, 09:16 AM   #8
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Old 03-31-2021, 04:06 PM   #9
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