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08-24-2010, 06:17 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: Foreclosureville, USA
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Maladjusted
Beyond the perimeter
there is no pain,
though we are torn, and torn again.
Layers of being are peeled
so rapidly, beyond the perimeter.
A wheel inside reveals itself.
In its spokes, we are suspended
between dimensions, between dreams.
"Turn and burn", say the twisting spirits
as they laugh at my inertia.
The hoax of matter is exposed.
I wonder, though...
how many layers to go?
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09-04-2010, 07:19 PM
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Level 5 - Deep Thinker
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Location: Lakeview
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Re: Maladjusted
So what youre saying is, beyond the perimeter there is a banana?
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09-04-2010, 07:41 PM
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Up From The Skies
Suicide Booth ID: 13
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Given To Fly!!!!!
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Re: Maladjusted
peel away the stone
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09-05-2010, 11:30 AM
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Re: Maladjusted
lol lotus
good one, kronos. the only thing i didn't like was 'inertia.' It didn't feel like it fit there.
But that's just me
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10-15-2010, 06:29 PM
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Level 2 - Poster
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: Foreclosureville, USA
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Re: Maladjusted
Quote:
Originally Posted by lotus.
peel away the stone
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lol
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