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Old 12-05-2017, 02:28 PM   #1
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Silent Shout

Have you ever been in so much pain that you just want to claw your eyes out? With the air is so still that you can hear your soul shout.

Like a tremor from deep beneath the earth. A tumor that is ready to explode that has been building up since your birth.

Silent tears running down your face, accumulating softly on the cotton shirt that you wear. With every breath this heart reveals an expanding tear.

Ripping and shreading from within. Even a brief relief has not began to begin.

Is this living, or is this just holding out? If only you could close your eyes and take a new route.

With this little ryhme, it's all that you've got. Trying to untangle this infinate suffering knot.
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Old 12-06-2017, 03:48 AM   #2
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Re: Silent Shout

yeah.

and yes.
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Old 03-08-2018, 04:35 AM   #3
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Re: Silent Shout

...Can't shed a tear to please this soul;
And release this pain.
Lacrimal glands, drained denial-of-service;
The time you get to solve this puzzle;
Uncertainty and confusion won’t let you go.
The time you've got;
Rip this trail (of thoughts) apart;
And put it back again.
Ohh, take (a deep breath);
One way or against the other;
It must be done.

>Once you think or imagine killing yourself, you’re on the train of thoughts. It doesn’t let you go. A ticking bomb, the timer starts counting an unknown period. The time you get to solve this pain. Rip it apart, and put it back again. One way or the other, it must be done.
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