I'm really not too confident with lyrics and singing at the moment, since I've never really taken writing lyrics seriously... I like to write poetry and that sort of thing, so I should probably try and do something of that nature when I'm writing.
As I said in my post, I'm not writing tremendously complex lyrics... I'd hate for them to be any simpler, because then I'd pretty much be spelling them out.
I'm not going to crack it because of someone offering their opinion, besides, its good to get feedback.
I've been working a fair bit on timing lately, in my singing, because I realised that I was pretty out in most songs I've come up with. I've also been listening to singing in a different light. I previously didn't really realise that rhythm in singing was an important issue.

I'm pretty open-minded in terms of music, because unless I'm prepared to take on board whats being said, I might as well not share my music. I'm interested in learning more, so as to improve. I actually wanted to share music here because its hard to get an honest opinion out of my friends and family.
So thanks for that, and anyone else...? feedback...?