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06-08-2005, 06:57 PM
Drums, guitar, and bass are great. Turn the bass volume up though, and tell the vocalist not to force it so much. Both songs have great instrumentals and decent vocals. The instrumentals are just really great, though. Really cool.
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Re: + - HAVE A LISTEN it can't hurt
Drums, guitar, and bass are great. Turn the bass volume up though, and tell the vocalist not to force it so much. Both songs have great instrumentals and decent vocals. The instrumentals are just really great, though. Really cool.
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06-09-2005, 07:33 AM
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Drums, guitar, and bass are great. Turn the bass volume up though, and tell the vocalist not to force it so much. Both songs have great instrumentals and decent vocals. The instrumentals are just really great, though. Really cool.
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cheers man!
i'll pass on the messages!
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06-09-2005, 07:33 AM
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Drums, guitar, and bass are great. Turn the bass volume up though, and tell the vocalist not to force it so much. Both songs have great instrumentals and decent vocals. The instrumentals are just really great, though. Really cool.
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cheers man!
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Not bad stuff, me likes.
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06-10-2005, 10:57 AM
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Not bad stuff, me likes.
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06-10-2005, 11:13 AM
Some good ideas in there, but the vocalist kinda throws it all off at times. Ditto the trying too hard comment, and I think he's just way too loud in the mix. Blue Skies sounds overly busy to the point of being nearly distracting - something has to step back a bit, and if I had to pick something, I'd say un-busy the drums. S and M seems much more refined and solid. The instrumentation overall is good stuff and I'd say the mix is pretty nice too, aside from the vocals.
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Some good ideas in there, but the vocalist kinda throws it all off at times. Ditto the trying too hard comment, and I think he's just way too loud in the mix. Blue Skies sounds overly busy to the point of being nearly distracting - something has to step back a bit, and if I had to pick something, I'd say un-busy the drums. S and M seems much more refined and solid. The instrumentation overall is good stuff and I'd say the mix is pretty nice too, aside from the vocals.
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You part do you play in the band Haich?
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You part do you play in the band Haich?
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06-10-2005, 01:18 PM
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06-10-2005, 01:19 PM
cheers for the feedback! we have been working on both songs and have added new sections to make transistions smoother etc.
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cheers for the feedback! we have been working on both songs and have added new sections to make transistions smoother etc.
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I look forward to it, nice mellow stuff.
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06-10-2005, 03:37 PM
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I look forward to it, nice mellow stuff.
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Oh, but tell your vocalist to mellow out a bit. I agree with the above comments, it is very noticably forced. Sounds like he really pushes too hard, although I do think he has a good base to work off of. Tell him to
- Keep a consistent pitch, tone, and vibrato (or work on it to get to there)
- Don't force the air, work on diaphragm usage
Other than that, good work. I like your progressions, vocally and instrumentally, and I look forward to the final product.
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Oh, but tell your vocalist to mellow out a bit. I agree with the above comments, it is very noticably forced. Sounds like he really pushes too hard, although I do think he has a good base to work off of. Tell him to
- Keep a consistent pitch, tone, and vibrato (or work on it to get to there)
- Don't force the air, work on diaphragm usage
Other than that, good work. I like your progressions, vocally and instrumentally, and I look forward to the final product.
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06-11-2005, 01:43 PM
The drums are GREAT ! I also like the scream in 'Blue Skies' I would use that more often in the song.
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06-11-2005, 01:43 PM
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The drums are GREAT ! I also like the scream in 'Blue Skies' I would use that more often in the song.
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06-12-2005, 05:45 AM
cheers guys! we have two other songs, but they haven't been recorded yet, hopefully get them done soon!
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cheers guys! we have two other songs, but they haven't been recorded yet, hopefully get them done soon!
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06-12-2005, 06:31 PM
Your singer has horrible time. It's akward and annoying.
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Your singer has horrible time. It's akward and annoying.
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06-13-2005, 01:53 AM
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Your singer has horrible time. It's akward and annoying.
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you have horrible english...
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06-14-2005, 07:35 PM
Its really good so far.
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You have a chance to go big, very unique...
Actually, your vocalist is great.
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Play your cards right and you'll go big...I'll buy a cd if you have one ready!
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Its really good so far.
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You have a chance to go big, very unique...
Actually, your vocalist is great.
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Play your cards right and you'll go big...I'll buy a cd if you have one ready!
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06-14-2005, 08:26 PM
Love S and M. Good stuff. not impressed by the singer.
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Love S and M. Good stuff. not impressed by the singer.
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06-15-2005, 08:29 PM
Pure emotion, think of a diamond not yet carved. Potential is there.
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Pure emotion, think of a diamond not yet carved. Potential is there.
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06-16-2005, 08:03 AM
yeah i'll take a cd too. you guys are gonna be huge. well, you'll be one of those really good bands with a cult following.
don't forget to credit us in your little "thank you" notes.
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yeah i'll take a cd too. you guys are gonna be huge. well, you'll be one of those really good bands with a cult following.
don't forget to credit us in your little "thank you" notes.
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06-16-2005, 08:06 AM
Lol, indeed. Be flattered, haich.
Just say that the Toolshed taught you all you needed to know about life (jk) and brag about how awesome we are.
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Lol, indeed. Be flattered, haich.
Just say that the Toolshed taught you all you needed to know about life (jk) and brag about how awesome we are.
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06-17-2005, 01:53 AM
hehe cheers guys! :-D
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hehe cheers guys! :-D
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06-17-2005, 01:55 AM
might be recording 3 more songs over the summer, enough for an EP!
post them on here again!
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might be recording 3 more songs over the summer, enough for an EP!
post them on here again!
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