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"Hold On"

BrightyBrighty
09-28-2003, 04:43 AM

I wish I were getting points for being last in line
I'd be winning by now

I took a walk in the rain to hide my tears
And loose my self
My colors fade and run off
Just before going down the drain

I'm falling is slow motion
When my release from gravity failed me
Every one fall away
Fall away from me all

Please hold me now
Because I think I'm falling
Please take my hand and run away
Please take me to where I'll be ok

this and more at: http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/...=3455&alid=760

Last edited by BrightyBrighty; 09-28-2003 at 04:45 AM..

09-28-2003, 04:43 AM	#1
BrightyBrighty Level 4 - Thinker Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: not where but when Posts: 26 Bincount™: 0	"Hold On" I wish I were getting points for being last in line I'd be winning by now I took a walk in the rain to hide my tears And loose my self My colors fade and run off Just before going down the drain I'm falling is slow motion When my release from gravity failed me Every one fall away Fall away from me all Please hold me now Because I think I'm falling Please take my hand and run away Please take me to where I'll be ok this and more at: http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/...=3455&alid=760 Last edited by BrightyBrighty; 09-28-2003 at 04:45 AM..
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psilomind
09-28-2003, 06:19 AM

Yeah I listened to this from the other thread... Its a shame that it got ignored, but I had nothing to say at the time, so...

Basically the melody and the likes were great, but as far as vocals and lyrics go, im not sure, I guess its not my type of music. Make it a little less whiney and a little more heart-felt, and youve got something going.

So in summary, its pretty good, but it could be better.

09-28-2003, 06:19 AM	#2
psilomind Level 9 - Obstreperous Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: New York Posts: 1,519 Bincount™: 138	Yeah I listened to this from the other thread... Its a shame that it got ignored, but I had nothing to say at the time, so... Basically the melody and the likes were great, but as far as vocals and lyrics go, im not sure, I guess its not my type of music. Make it a little less whiney and a little more heart-felt, and youve got something going. So in summary, its pretty good, but it could be better.
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BrightyBrighty
09-28-2003, 10:35 AM

umm ok...whatever.

09-28-2003, 10:35 AM	#3
BrightyBrighty Level 4 - Thinker Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: not where but when Posts: 26 Bincount™: 0	mmm.... umm ok...whatever.
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