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12-13-2009, 03:43 PM
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I'm not the greatest at improv, admittedly. But I figured I'd post up here to see what you all might be able to tell me I need work on.

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/Message.mp3

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A bit of bass
I'm not the greatest at improv, admittedly. But I figured I'd post up here to see what you all might be able to tell me I need work on.

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/Message.mp3

Drums made in FL.
Bass by me.
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12-13-2009, 04:13 PM
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wasn't bad, a little cheesy though. But then again you were just improv-ing randomly, so I dunno. I don't have much to say other than 1. make the drums more varied and 2. take your coolest/favorite riffs and expand from there
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wasn't bad, a little cheesy though. But then again you were just improv-ing randomly, so I dunno. I don't have much to say other than 1. make the drums more varied and 2. take your coolest/favorite riffs and expand from there
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12-13-2009, 10:01 PM
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Link ain't working for me,just a question mark over the quicktime symbol.
same thing happened in etc43 thread.
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Link ain't working for me,just a question mark over the quicktime symbol.
same thing happened in etc43 thread.
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