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Old 09-08-2011, 01:23 AM   #1
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where the cork stops

im bottled up
like a valentine denied
or a lover unloved
it hurts to drink the sad made wine
my fingers twirl around the stem
im twirled around outside and within
too many lies, they have confused all the world
anymore I expect that my view will be swirled
hard to recognize
unable to sort
mastering there masterplanned lies
they make an art of it
and it pierces into me
might as well play the game
perhaps tossed around
they make a dart of it
nevermind the target is my heart
im blank
and this blanket covers where i lie stark
ive been torn apart
for what reason?
she was a new and beautiful uncharted flavor
a wine for the season
and while you got drunk
i sunk and drowned
you didnt notice
for you were off in a tale
not touching the ground
at least for a night
but i bled
just right
filled the magnum full
i was the bearer of your choices and the toll
i paid the high price
twist twist twist
you twisted me
not nice
and that is just downplaying.
to be true id have to say alot more than what little im saying.
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Old 09-10-2011, 05:08 PM   #2
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Re: where the cork stops

i enjoyed this very nice
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Old 09-21-2011, 01:34 PM   #3
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Re: where the cork stops

Powefull. I like your cadence. Thank you for sharring.
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