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Old 04-19-2003, 11:11 AM   #1
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Slithering.

The world is what you want and lust
well cant you see?
The world is what ill never be
so, hate me, my friends
i anticipate and wait up late
and hurt and help and hang and think
i watch and die a little
as you sink, oh so much deeper
Chain of erections
millions of miles wide,
just waiting to slither deep inside
misunderstand
and still its okay for them to slide
hate and swear and hit and scream
ironically, i believe everything
im teaming up with the enemy
my soul is burning in dirty sugar
pissing and drinking galore
revenge will never settle the score
i want the truth and nothing more
but you dig deeper and harder
drilling my teeth
ill smile almost every fucking minute
the pain is justified, and although crying
ill pay you in full till i have nothing
so rape me
why dont you fucking degrade me?
gossip suggests that youve laid me...
why dont you just kill me?
i am spilling over the brim.
groaing and hissing at him.
all of them.
burn me at the stake.
overide my gentle side and finish me off.
my friend.
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Old 04-19-2003, 11:43 AM   #2
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Very dark. Have you been abused?
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Old 04-28-2003, 06:56 AM   #3
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thats relative.
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