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Old 11-07-2015, 05:41 PM   #1
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Infinite Doom

Stuck inside this alternate dimension
wretched with filth and sorrow
abandoned with the dusty dunes
there's no way out of this infinite doom

They say that you go to a place called Heaven
after dismay
moral decay
stuck in this diluded dimension

If there's a way out
I would like to know
take me with you
from this broken home
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Old 11-08-2015, 04:24 PM   #2
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Re: Infinite Doom

I like it.

Alternate and diluded. We get but a glimpse, sometimes?

It has made me think, albeit, only w/ the 10% brain capacity available to me. I, too, would like to know. See you in the milky way.
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Old 11-08-2015, 06:33 PM   #3
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Re: Infinite Doom

I think that we keep coming back here to learn from past mistakes. There's no way out until we have learned. I should be dead, yet here I am. Over and over again. There's no escaping your life, even if you keep getting transported to alternate realities. You can't tell the difference, but you're in a different reality.

Life is a ferris wheel of mistakes and learning. Better get it right, or we'll all be doing this for all of eternity.

Don't look back...live and learn so that we may pass on to the next life. A better one, to start the cycle all over again.
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Old 11-08-2015, 06:35 PM   #4
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Re: Infinite Doom

Turn like a wheel inside a wheel.
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Old 12-28-2015, 01:41 PM   #5
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Re: Infinite Doom

I firmly believe I've done this before. Clockwork angels.

Somedays i'm plus 1, then zero, then minus again... you'd think i'd learn. But it's hard.

Just sitting here watching the squirrels go round and round and round...
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