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Old 05-15-2009, 07:06 PM   #1
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The Beginning of the Extremity

This secondary venture is one of downhill proportions. One that is not, in any means, meant to…
…entertain.

I am
Tired.

Of trying to please everyone else when it is I who isn’t pleased.




I love a hand full of people, the souls that connect so

WELL

To me

Are the ones in my heart and I have not one bad thing to write about
Them.

This action acts as a relief valve from the

PRESSURE

That builds from the others.

The tiny, the scattered, the ticks.


This is not a continuation or a sequel or prequel or any kind of quel.

This is a vent. Again with the fingers of sore hands, and the mind of a pressured brain.

Why do I do this you might say,

Well,

I don’t care what you might say so go piss yourself while I cum for the second time while she is gone and sick and confused.

I’m tapped, I try to digress, and I succeed.


If pain is weakness leaving the body, than I am superman. Beyond superman, I am Ethan Giovanni, for those that don’t know him,


JUST WAIT, he is your new god.



This is what I do to keep my mind fresh, clean and sheer.


I AM A WRITER! MY WORDS, NOT MY VOICE, WILL BE HEARD.



Be Patient.




Must keep reminding myself of this.


That sounds familiar.

It will come in the night and be waiting for me in the morning, in the new light, in the new time, in the new world. I think.


CWW is the goal, completion, finishing, whole, and created.




Through out the process things can get a little unorthodox, a little disarrayed.

And that is when I can get demonically pissed off, beyond the bounds that Luce has.

REMEMBER KIDS, He has no presence, only in our minds or hearts, depending on who you are, can He control you. Control yourself,


SELF-CONTROL IS THE KEY TO SAVING YOURSELF; FUCK EVERYONE ELSE.


LESSON #1 completed.
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Old 05-16-2009, 08:07 PM   #2
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Re: The Beginning of the Extremity

All this needs is for the font/color to change at key points.

edit: meaning 'well done'.
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