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Old 05-07-2009, 01:30 AM   #1
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Long Distance...

Thoughts provoke me to consider
taking you out into the world.
We'll dig deep, and deeper more
till we find that special spot.

Courage whispers,
"it's time you ask."

The wall between us keeps growing
It's now too high to climb.
I'm walking around, discovering
it's neverending.
I grab things to break it down,
but none of them seem to scratch the brick.
I've grown tired and weary,
almost to the point of giving it up.

Hope whispers
"Don't give up your almost there."

As the days pass,
my connection to you gets strong.
I can't stop wondering,
if you are still on the otherside
waiting patiently like me
For this wall to fall.
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Old 05-09-2009, 09:34 PM   #2
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Re: Long Distance...

Sounded like a father losing touch with his son.

warm, cold, not even close?

edit: saw the title, a relationship?
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Old 05-11-2009, 06:13 PM   #3
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Re: Long Distance...

Basically it's about a long distance relationship, wondering if the other is still in love with the other. It could be about two birds, people, just whatever you want it to be.
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Old 05-11-2009, 09:05 PM   #4
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Re: Long Distance...

Tear down the wall.
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Old 05-13-2009, 03:44 AM   #5
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Re: Long Distance...

heh...I already did. I wrote this for the mood and feeling of having to deal with a long distance connection.
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Old 05-13-2009, 04:15 AM   #6
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Re: Long Distance...

lol, you mean a phone?
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