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Old 04-30-2009, 11:09 AM   #1
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Restless

just open my eyes
and catch my breath
cause I was never ready
for the final day


I'm left speechless
and desperate to find a way
to cover my eyes
and wish it all away

And all I have left to do is slip away
into oblivion, into the darkness
Thinking about the emptiness
and drawing ever closer to ending it

I cannot do this to myself, I cannot run away
I cannot disappear, I'll never walk away

So much for the light
I'm walking around in circles
Just trying to find the door
to get myself back to me

My memories speak to me
Never letting go of anything
I can't seem to heal the wounds
I want them to remind me

of you...

And all I have left to do is slip away
into oblivion, into the darkness
Thinking about the emptiness
and drawing ever closer to ending it

I cannot do this to myself, I cannot run away
I cannot disappear, I'll never walk away
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Old 04-30-2009, 02:10 PM   #2
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Re: Restless

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Just trying to find the door
to get myself back to me
i like these lines
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Old 05-01-2009, 06:26 PM   #3
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Re: Restless

yeah I'm trying to pick my creativity back up It's been a while since I've wrote anything
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Old 05-01-2009, 07:24 PM   #4
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Re: Restless

Don't allow something like that to whither
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