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Old 05-05-2009, 05:56 AM   #1
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The Bait

Come out, little one
beneath the shadow of the tree
put your hand in mine
and let's take a walk for free
I know that you've been hiding
waiting for a special day
and I'm sure that we will find it
if we look along the way

Come out, my little angel
cause I want you all the time
if you stay in there much longer
I'll have to crawl inside
I've been singing to the sun
thinking of new ways to play
it's fun and all, I guess..
but I lose my will to stay

Come out, my girl, my lover
it's really just a ride
I want the world to see you
with me beaming at your side
we can run into the forest
study tracks and talk to trees
we can call the clouds names
and drink water from the streams
we'll begin our greatest journey
following the ancient breeze
and if you come out here right now
You can be the first to lead!
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Old 05-05-2009, 07:43 PM   #2
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Re: The Bait

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and if you come out here right now
You can be the first to lead!
Yet another franchise.

But nice work, WIB
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Old 05-07-2009, 01:04 AM   #3
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Re: The Bait

I really like this one. It sounds pretty, and uplifting. Rhyming is simple, but it works well. Good job.
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Old 05-09-2009, 09:43 PM   #4
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Re: The Bait

agreed

with pintw,

i dont know what tha hell coldlogic is talkin about
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Old 05-10-2009, 10:33 AM   #5
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Re: The Bait

Chicks online setting up franchises around the country/world.
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Old 05-10-2009, 04:52 PM   #6
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oh.
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Old 05-11-2009, 09:07 PM   #7
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Re: The Bait

I really like this poem Wolfman's Imaginary Band, awesome. I am going to read it many more times.


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