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Old 10-26-2006, 08:12 PM   #1
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My Saturn

--My Saturn--


A faulty plan is commenced…
The distance set in stone. The present, aspiring memories.
Then comes my Saturn, reversing the poles of reason.

Now a jaded life is renewed…
The pulpy remains mended, by most unexpected Caduceus.
And there is my Saturn, phosphorescent Godsend.

But dark future still looms…
An unavoidable circumstance, dwelling ghoulishly.
And still, my Saturn, summoning the most irrational of feelings.

Now tortuous realization sets in…
The most unwelcome pain, now imminent.
The bleed, steady and streaming, so deadly.

Amongst it all,
My Saturn glimmers on the horizon,
And that makes all the difference.
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Old 10-28-2006, 11:34 PM   #2
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Re: My Saturn

i like.
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