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Old 10-17-2006, 09:46 PM   #1
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I am lucky!

I went today
I had plans, ideas, times
It didn't happen as I'd hoped
I was frustrated, angry, annoyed....

But then I listened and heard
I looked and saw
I am very lucky....
I am loved!
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Old 10-18-2006, 06:34 AM   #2
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Re: I am lucky!

what did you see?

I'm curious, but don't necessarily need to know.
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Old 10-18-2006, 07:46 AM   #3
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Re: I am lucky!

I don't know what you were writing about specifically, but I think we can all relate to trying to get something, having it fail initially, but then work out in the end. I like your poem very much.
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Old 10-18-2006, 05:51 PM   #4
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Re: I am lucky!

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Originally Posted by ObiJohnKenobi View Post
what did you see?

I'm curious, but don't necessarily need to know.
Teh Light

Lol

Just beautiful things that reminded me to pay attention to what is and not obsess over failed fantasies
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