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Old 10-07-2006, 12:37 PM   #1
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The String

[The String]

Ten views of the world we perceive, nothing we look at is what it seems
Have some man pull us out of three, allowing so four comes to be
Though we see nothing past the three, we know there will be more to see
When we get past this old norm, and finally see nature’s true form

Just a slow vibration, according to the strings we know
We’re just waiting for the toe
To explain it all, to explain the random
Very few believe, how gravity
Answering the big questions, trying to find the toe
Theory of everything, we all want to know

Ten views of the world we perceive, nothing we look at is what it seems
Have some man pull us out of three, allowing so four comes to be
Though we see nothing past the three, we know there will be more to see
When we get past this old norm, and finally see nature’s true form
Have some urgency my friend, this is about to begin not to end

Gravity, please tell me, what you see, differently

You are open; I am closed, allowing me to move
Openness just keeps you still, sitting in the three
Four is for me, three is for you
You know you can’t see, what I can pass through

Gravity, please tell me, what you see, differently

Our view of reality, is what we see in the three
Yet what we really want to see, is to see through the unseen
Where nothing can be perceived, to find something few believe
It’s inconceivable to think, we’re just a vibration
When we get out of this old norm, we will see nature’s true form
Of which we have been searching for, through the years to see the four

Gravity, please tell me, what you see, differently
Out of three, to the four, out of four, to find more
When we collide, we will see, where you go, out of three
To the four? Just maybe, we found you, t-o-e
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Old 10-07-2006, 11:37 PM   #2
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Re: The String

Wow, that's all I have to say. I like this a lot. very deep.
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Old 10-10-2006, 12:30 PM   #3
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Re: The String

I've read this several times and i simply don't understand what "the three" or "the four" are. Is it common knowledge, and if not could you elaborate?
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Old 10-10-2006, 01:06 PM   #4
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Re: The String

I like this a lot.... could the "three" be the Trinity? It seems to fit, at least in my head.
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Old 10-10-2006, 06:44 PM   #5
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Well if nothing else jpmny333 you've offered validity on behalf of a writing that i personally think has little. Maybe it's presumptuous of me to think in such narrow terms, especially for someone with a definate lack of conventional religion, but if he/she is referring to the traditional "trinity", how could there be a "four"? Fo3, i admire the creativity and as the writer i suppose it shouldn't matter if i understand or not, but i'd like to. Anyone else?
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Old 10-11-2006, 05:16 PM   #6
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'Three' and 'Four' refer to the dimensions of this world. We see in three dimensions, yet we imagine what it's like to see in four. Or at least I do.

http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/nova/elegant/

Most of my inspiration for "The String" came from this site. I am intrigued by the universe and things on a grand scale. You may have not connected the title "The String" directly to string theory but I wouldn't blame you. TOE refers to 'theory of everything' and how we are searching for this. I'm not going to explain it all because most of what's is in "The String" are from that adress above. I hope this clears some things up for you.

Edit: Some quotes from the site. In case you don't feel like searching

"But will there ever be an explanation or a visual representation of higher dimensions that will truly satisfy the human mind? The answer to this question may forever be no. Not unless some four-dimensional life-form pulls us from our three-dimensional Spaceland and gives us a view of the world from its perspective."

"For the first time in the history of physics we therefore have a framework with the capacity to explain every fundamental feature upon which the universe is constructed. For this reason string theory is sometimes described as possibly being the "theory of everything" (T.O.E.) or the "ultimate" or "final" theory."


There's some things about gravity, but I couldn't find exactly what I wanted, but it's in there somewhere.
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Old 10-11-2006, 07:40 PM   #7
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Not that I believe in the Trinity, or any other human created idea of what God is...but I was just thinking that the 3 and 4 kind of went together with Creation...not necessarily the human race, just creation of something in general...my father was a minister throughout my whole childhood, so I tend to see things through a "traditional Christian" point of view...I realize now that most people who claim to be a Christian are some of the most disallusioned people there are....anyway I think this piece has incredible depth.
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Old 10-13-2006, 06:16 PM   #8
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Thank you. But in what I've written something is kind of being created. Another percpetion of the world is being "created". We are moved from 3rd dimension to 4th dimension with a helping hand. The Theory of Everything (TOE) is also looking to be created. So you weren't that far off in thinking that something was being created. Because something is, but not in the religious sense.


(I have no idea if that post makes sense or not)
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