greenfever

What is here and what
is now is real.
What was there and what was
then is real.
Here I feel it, in its truest
form; a touch, a word,
a whisper.
There I felt these things too,
but now they are a constant,
not quite a fact.
To have a split heart
makes one wonder,
where does her love really lie?
Here and now,
There and then,
my heart does not understand these
terms.

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reedc33

*scratches head*

Well, gee wiz, what's that about?

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greenfever

I don't feel that I need to explain my art to you, Warren.

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reedc33

Whatever you say, Gretchen. I guess I'll consult the Gods of Subjectivity.

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genome

i understand it. it is a confusing predicament. the feeling of the past reminding and disturbing the present.

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deviatedwolf625

Excellently written, I think. It describes the predicament, in a literal sense. Very straightforward.

I think it warrants an A.

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genome

although i have no authority on the subject, i second the A

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