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08-10-2006, 07:28 AM
The Deterior Thread
Most of you probably don't know that I've been writing some songs for the past year or so. I've finally gotten to the point where I'm starting the recording process, and I thought I'd share some of the results so far.
As of right now I have 2 "done" and I've uploaded the first for you to listen to. Feedback is appreciated (comments/questions, but not so much suggestions), though I'm not going to rerecord or write any more. Screw that.
Some notes before I'm bitched at too badly:
1) I suck at this whole recording thing, and I don't understand most of Cubase yet.
2) This is a rough version still, i.e. nothing's properly mixed, and most of it still needs aligned.
3) I like bass.
4) There aren't any vocals yet; there probably will be eventually.
www.purevolume.com/deterior
Someday (which will be after I get my friend to record acoustic parts for me...) the rest will probably show up here.
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The Deterior Thread
The Deterior Thread
Most of you probably don't know that I've been writing some songs for the past year or so. I've finally gotten to the point where I'm starting the recording process, and I thought I'd share some of the results so far.
As of right now I have 2 "done" and I've uploaded the first for you to listen to. Feedback is appreciated (comments/questions, but not so much suggestions), though I'm not going to rerecord or write any more. Screw that.
Some notes before I'm bitched at too badly:
1) I suck at this whole recording thing, and I don't understand most of Cubase yet.
2) This is a rough version still, i.e. nothing's properly mixed, and most of it still needs aligned.
3) I like bass.
4) There aren't any vocals yet; there probably will be eventually.
www.purevolume.com/deterior
Someday (which will be after I get my friend to record acoustic parts for me...) the rest will probably show up here.
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You know what's pretty damn funny? Yesterday before this thread was created I went to your purevolume and wondered how your ep was coming along.
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Re: The Deterior Thread
You know what's pretty damn funny? Yesterday before this thread was created I went to your purevolume and wondered how your ep was coming along.
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08-11-2006, 10:06 AM
Hah! Weird.
Yesterday I nearly finished the second one as well; that will get posted tomorrow or maybe the day after.
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Hah! Weird.
Yesterday I nearly finished the second one as well; that will get posted tomorrow or maybe the day after.
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At first I was iffy, but your progression really took off. Obviously a large Cult of Luna and early ISIS influence in my opinion. A good vocalist would really kill shit on this track.
Ideas for the track that my ears picked up:
- Some kind of synth wind swooshing during the beginning. That line isn't bad, but it needs something to fill in the cracks.
- I think the riff that comes in @ 2:21 would sound so much more epic if it were delayed.
Otherwise, keep writing. This shit is solid. And did I notice a riff in 9 somewhere in there?
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At first I was iffy, but your progression really took off. Obviously a large Cult of Luna and early ISIS influence in my opinion. A good vocalist would really kill shit on this track.
Ideas for the track that my ears picked up:
- Some kind of synth wind swooshing during the beginning. That line isn't bad, but it needs something to fill in the cracks.
- I think the riff that comes in @ 2:21 would sound so much more epic if it were delayed.
Otherwise, keep writing. This shit is solid. And did I notice a riff in 9 somewhere in there?
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08-11-2006, 10:14 AM
Thanks a bunch for the compliments and such, I'll look into those.
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And did I notice a riff in 9 somewhere in there?
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Yeah, the intro is in 9/8...but the drums are doing 4.5/4, whoa.
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Thanks a bunch for the compliments and such, I'll look into those.
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And did I notice a riff in 9 somewhere in there?
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Yeah, the intro is in 9/8...but the drums are doing 4.5/4, whoa.
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Plus, I really hear some tom laden tribally drumming in my head, but obviously that'd be really hard given that those drums sound programmed.
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Plus, I really hear some tom laden tribally drumming in my head, but obviously that'd be really hard given that those drums sound programmed.
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08-11-2006, 10:17 AM
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Don't get me wrong. They sound pretty damn good.
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Don't get me wrong. They sound pretty damn good.
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08-11-2006, 10:23 AM
Yeah, it took me forever to find good samples. They're mixed poorly here though, e.g. the snare is way too loud.
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Yeah, it took me forever to find good samples. They're mixed poorly here though, e.g. the snare is way too loud.
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Oh, and another suggestion. (I know it isn't properly mixed yet, but). The bassline @ 58 secs is really effing loud.
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Oh, and another suggestion. (I know it isn't properly mixed yet, but). The bassline @ 58 secs is really effing loud.
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08-11-2006, 10:29 AM
Okay.
I hope other people know this thread exists too.
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Okay.
I hope other people know this thread exists too.
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I really dig the interlude you just put up. Tool goes postrock sounding.
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I really dig the interlude you just put up. Tool goes postrock sounding.
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08-14-2006, 03:44 PM
Okay...well, since I was late on my promise I put up 3 songs instead of 1.
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Okay...well, since I was late on my promise I put up 3 songs instead of 1.
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08-14-2006, 07:52 PM
Hey, I listened to something you put up here a couple months ago and liked it a lot. I'm excited to check the new stuff out.
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Hey, I listened to something you put up here a couple months ago and liked it a lot. I'm excited to check the new stuff out.
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I dig the new shite.
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I dig the new shite.
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Awesome. I like it.
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Awesome. I like it.
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07-14-2007, 09:27 PM
thanks.
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ohh, sounds good mang. very nice.
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ohh, sounds good mang. very nice.
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09-08-2007, 08:42 PM
BUMP WHAT THE HELL DUDES
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BUMP WHAT THE HELL DUDES
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FUCK YOU
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10-06-2007, 07:19 AM
upon listening. decent stuff, with some sligthly more proffesional production/mixing could be better than decent, but i guess theres not really much us diy musos can do about that
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upon listening. decent stuff, with some sligthly more proffesional production/mixing could be better than decent, but i guess theres not really much us diy musos can do about that
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10-06-2007, 07:21 AM
thanks. I agree. also I'm really awful at singing properly. never really practiced.
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thanks. I agree. also I'm really awful at singing properly. never really practiced.
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10-06-2007, 07:34 AM
same, my throat is just really weak and incable of making noises that dont require me singing perfectly in tune to sound good. i can nail one note but i forget which one. i need to learn how to use auto tuner correctionering software.
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same, my throat is just really weak and incable of making noises that dont require me singing perfectly in tune to sound good. i can nail one note but i forget which one. i need to learn how to use auto tuner correctionering software.
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10-06-2007, 07:39 AM
aw yeah, that'd be a sweet idea.
you have no idea how many times i had to do pitch shifting in cubase when doing vocals. it was crazy.
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aw yeah, that'd be a sweet idea.
you have no idea how many times i had to do pitch shifting in cubase when doing vocals. it was crazy.
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10-06-2007, 07:41 AM
you should ask maynard to sing for you.
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you should ask maynard to sing for you.
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10-06-2007, 07:44 AM
he totally would too.
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he totally would too.
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10-06-2007, 07:48 AM
he has no reason not too.
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he has no reason not too.
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10-06-2007, 07:49 AM
my music is better than puscifer anyway, amirite?
p.s. did you listen to the whole thing, or just the one song?
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my music is better than puscifer anyway, amirite?
p.s. did you listen to the whole thing, or just the one song?
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10-06-2007, 07:50 AM
i've only listened to steeper and what i leave so far
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i've only listened to steeper and what i leave so far
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10-06-2007, 07:52 AM
oh, okay.
i think the last two (the ones you haven't listened to) are more popular among the last.fm crowd or something. nobody seems to like what i leave.
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oh, okay.
i think the last two (the ones you haven't listened to) are more popular among the last.fm crowd or something. nobody seems to like what i leave.
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10-06-2007, 07:55 AM
i'll check out the rest when i can listen to them loud without awakening my slumbering parents.
edit: spamming some dudes thread with my own music is [no]
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i'll check out the rest when i can listen to them loud without awakening my slumbering parents.
edit: spamming some dudes thread with my own music is [no]
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edit: thx man
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edit: thx man
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10-06-2007, 07:58 AM
nice!
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BUMPABUMPABUMP
because I have a new demo up.
( http://www.myspace.com/deterior1)
Sorry it's on Myspace but that was most convenient. GO LISTEN
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01-14-2008, 11:03 PM
Somehow.. I already have Deterior on my computer... Pretty good, could use a little less technical flow and more hypnotic nosies... But, that's not really a complaint cause live shit usually fixes that.
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Somehow.. I already have Deterior on my computer... Pretty good, could use a little less technical flow and more hypnotic nosies... But, that's not really a complaint cause live shit usually fixes that.
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