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Old 10-27-2019, 07:17 AM   #1
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Widely Agape and Soaking with the Deepest Agape

Words have always strengthened my opposition, but your actions . .

Your actions convert me.

You watch
as I chisel open
my own shell
with each verbal shard
that is spit forth from
the darkest and dankest,
yet most lively and vital,
recess of my caved-in psyche.

An exposition that
touches you deep
and stimulates
some thickly insulated
nerve
that can only be triggered
by an onslaught of vigorous
poking.

The threshold is met.

And you melt into
moist silence and sighs.

In the ensuing silence,
I am burned by
my own truest sorrow,
as I now see it,
assumed by you
vicariously
through my words
and my eyes.

For it is my sorrow,
that pours forth
from your watery, loving eyes.

Sadness and silence
staring through
an ocean of emotion,
that both, at once,
exposes and shatters
some version of my self,
in the reflection
of my own feeble mind.

Shattered by your crying silence.
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Old 10-27-2019, 08:18 AM   #2
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Re: Widely Agape and Soaking with the Deepest Agape

Your writing inspires me. Well done.
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