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Old 05-04-2010, 05:46 AM   #1
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Selfless

You were like
a shooting star caught in the glimpse of the unsuspecting
a flower picked and not put in water
innocence of youth
in other words
gone sooner than I would have liked

you are lovely
a paradox worth contemplating
the kisser of my dreams
and the most enjoyable waste of time I have ever endured

more credit worthy than the bank of your heart implies
but as it goes your opinion of yourself will always outweigh mine

bless you
for humouring my ways, sharing your time, broadening my perspectives
and thank you
for making this bitter end so sweet
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Old 05-22-2010, 04:19 AM   #2
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Re: Selfless

I know the feeling.
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Old 05-22-2010, 08:38 AM   #3
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Re: Selfless

music is my aeroplane...

that mutha*****'rs always filled w/ pain
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Old 05-22-2010, 07:50 PM   #4
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Re: Selfless

good stuff, shardzo. really drives home the point
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Old 05-29-2010, 10:10 AM   #5
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Re: Selfless

Gracias amigos
appreciate the read and comments
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Old 06-28-2010, 05:42 PM   #6
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Re: Selfless

Really like it man. Keep it up, would love to read more. PEACE
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