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Old 09-21-2008, 05:57 PM   #1
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Chasm

Carry on, my old friend,
it’s never too late to grow.
Whatever ain’t ash already will surely
find itself smoldering soon.
See I’ve already been there
and I’ve seen the deep chasm that calls you
trying to cast you down. Your friends,
they give you no comfort at all.
After all, they have no care for you.
They focus on their little drinks,
Their cigs starting to wink out.
And trust me when I say,
their time will come
as surely as the sun rises and sets every day.
Don’t follow them, my bitter friend,
don’t let what happened to your mother drag you down.
Your journey to the mountain top is the real story;
Think of an ending in which you could truly be happy
by joining the others falling down the chasm.
You will find that this is no way to end your tale.
So step away from the edge,
And climb the mountain where your goal resides,
only there will you find what I’ve recently learned;
Humanity is meant for greater things.
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Old 11-17-2009, 08:51 PM   #2
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Re: Chasm

vibes duplicate. take the higher road for sure.

whatever i mean.


awsome job.
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